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Smile out a lieSmile out a lie  Smiles are what lie across my face.  
I am so well adjusted  
I am so well put together  
I have the world by the horns  
That’s what they think.  
 
A smile lies across my face as I am pierced again.  
Those words.  
You’re worthless.  
You’re a faiure.  
I hate you, why don’t you just go away.  
They are hissed in my ear.  
 
I want to fight back and say go away leave me alone.  
You aren’t the boss of me  
But I can help but endulge in the possibility.  
What if he’s right.  
Maybe I should leave and neve Smile out a lie
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LaudareLaudare  
Lauda!  
He says.  
Or what?  
More of the same?  
You may have broken my head with your black biblical thrashing.  
But my spirit is still strong.  
 
Astum!  
I can show you were they run.  
The hooves pounding the green and golden brown paths in the fall.  
I can show you the icy veins they swim in the winter.  
There children frolick in front of my eyes in the spring time.  
I can show you how experience and youth come to fruition in the summer.  
They are me.  
I am them.  
They are in me.  
Then.  
Now.  
And forever.  
With som Laudare
by ~chico388
Angels and DemonsAngels and Demons  
We are all but Angels and demons  
Not one  
Not the other  But so undoubtedly entwined  
That one could hate ever last one of us.  
 
But what would be the point of that?  
You may not have been the one who coerced Adam into stealing the fruit.  
But Christ’s blood is still on your hands!  
Make like paul and request exiting the world upside down.  
You are not fit to untie the sandels of our creators son.  
 
With his mighty hand piecing through the clouds  
And deep into your heart he can see  How much a devil you may be.  
Are you his Angels and Demons
by ~chico388
Perceptions can be decievingPerceptions can be misleading. Perceptions often are misleading. For instance if you were to look at me you would probally immediately assume a few things, some right, some wrong. You could say I am tall, strong, educated, who knows. You might think after a brief period you might have figured me out. Which could be true but you would have to know how certain things feel to do that. With that being said I hope to God that, that isn’t true.  
 
One of assumption you could make is certainly right I am a large man. There is no denying it, but  I was small once. I was young and innocent and without ability to protect mysel Perceptions can be decieving
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:iconemmie-lynne:
=Emmie-Lynne Oct 2, 2008, 9:51:34 PM
Thanks for the :+devwatch: greatly appreciate it :D

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
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~chico388 Oct 2, 2008, 9:55:13 PM
No problem its what I am here for. GO INSOMNIA and all its wonders.
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=Emmie-Lynne Oct 2, 2008, 10:01:29 PM
you REALLY have insomnia?... Well, you could tell me what you think of this now, [link]

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
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~chico388 Oct 2, 2008, 10:22:08 PM
haha sure, if you read the poem I am going to put up call Angels and Demons. Deal? (puts out hand)
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=Emmie-Lynne Oct 3, 2008, 5:03:06 AM
sure thing!

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
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=Emmie-Lynne Oct 2, 2008, 9:45:26 PM
So, you decided to become a deviant today huh? How does that feel? Thanks for the suggestions, I use overly dramatic words sometimes, I didn't mean to come across that way

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
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~chico388 Oct 2, 2008, 9:47:26 PM
It feels wonderfull to deviate from normality for a while. To answer your initial question. So since I have misinterpreted how it was ment to come across how did you mean it. I understand if you don't want to exsplain because you might feel it will reck the poem. If that is the case I will be curious and will look forward to reading another poem from you.
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=Emmie-Lynne Oct 2, 2008, 9:50:53 PM
I meant to express my gratitude to God for the joy I am able to express and for the confidence he allows me to have in myself. He also keeps me in check though, which is why he is such a faithful friend :) I was trying to express his power of glory, not the power of his strength

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
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~chico388 Oct 2, 2008, 9:53:52 PM
Alright that makes alot of sense. Honestly this is why I somtimes hate/love great poetry. It is so openended yet can be very precise if you unlock the puzzle.
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=Emmie-Lynne Oct 2, 2008, 9:58:31 PM
haha... I just discovered this as well, not with my own poetry but with reading my friend's :iconpeacefulsoul:

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Unknown to the world, but deep in the forest... tiptoes delicate, tiny feet the size of bee's knees.
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